Water For The People
Many people have water but not all people don't have clean water give Havelock North for example there water has been with some kind of bacteria could camphlobacto, this disease coused lots of problems and it's still going round, so maybe people could donate money to hospitals to get medicine and to clean the water.I hope this peace of writing will hopefuly persuade you to go with my point of veiw about this incident.
But there is one problem that most would think how would people would pay to fix the water because not all people have the money to pay for it. But I believe we can so we could at least give one dollare to help clean the water because you can change peoples lives.
By Krystal
Awesome to see you trying new words I agree with Jessie a few spelling errors your still good at this writing.
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